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[uniqueandalanis4]

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[Stinky]

OOOhhh I liked that, kinda spooky,

[uniqueandalanis4]

spooky?haha whats up 'what do u mean?lol explain it to me ahh ?
Posted on: May 04, 2008, 06:22:42 AM--------------------------------------------------------------------------------

[Stinky]

Spooky as in haunting, like your being haunted by a memory or something.

[uniqueandalanis4]

hmmmm,gosh im a bad writter..sorry i'll erase it..
thanks for ur comment..

[Stinky]

not at all. I liked it the way it is  It was a complement

[uniqueandalanis4]

thanks for ur comment.

[dutchgirlfan]

i love the 2nd post...great imagine you create. Nice metaphore. I know how writersblocks feel like. THEY SUCK! THEY ARE FRUSTRATING!! But you know; be patience, before you know you have a blast of inspiration again!

[uniqueandalanis4]

aww thanks ...

[hazel681]

I LOVE THE 2nd ONE soooooooooooo MUCH!!!! and the 1rst one is AMAZING! you're a great writer! im ur #1 fan!

[Greek]

love it silly. keep it flowing

[uniqueandalanis4]

 :smiley25:haha thanks silly..haha im getting up there lol.. :smiley31:dork..
Posted on: May 05, 2008, 12:17:52 PMwhere are you

[Mrok(Gloom)Robert M]

Uh... wow... What bright power made me read your stuff now and today?... You are amazingly emotional and your talent have good taste... Its funny and silly when you say they are not great... but too much perfection can ruin original form... Ekhm... Some titles would help me navigate... Darn... I dont have much time now... and I have others work to comment first... Hehe... Reading your arts now was a coincidence.... but you wrote in beauty and in unrepeatable way... Keep it up... Rise up your talent... but you dont have to change everything... Its already great, touchy, valuable and... perfect in shining... I will try to find some time to comment on each one in separate way.... I hope... I promiss.... ok.... I fly away... jk... but seriously.... time to bed.... zzzzzZZZZZZ.... C ya...

[uniqueandalanis4]

woah your comment mean's the world to me ..thank you so much for comging by and taking the time out to read my stuff ''im trying to get back to where i was before ..i reallyyyyyyy want to write my book on my life story,ill give you a copy when i do!!!!
my name is april by the way.!and your name?
take care..
god bless..
Posted on: May 05, 2008, 04:15:21 P

 
 
 :first:mother ..
god bless you always..xoxoxooxoxo xoxoxox <3333333333

APRIL ANN..

[Tj_pinkgurl]

Hey april
Yay your writing again
and its getting better and better
I love the deepness in them
and how they have there own story line
Keep it up
They are awesome !

peace