Topic: Poem by Robert and Me

[Vikki]

I remember you   

Memory metor struck my mind
Sweetness stirs with bitterness in your voice
Your soft delicate touch
Innocent heart felting look
Desire to hold you close
Feel your warm frame
Hearts beating in a rhythm like no other
Souls connecting, hearts connecting and minds connecting
Deep into each others thoughts.
Cold tear is cutting your smiling face
You are leaving me
Alone I will be
Nothing to do
No one to turn to
Your photo burning it’s place in heart
Always so close but so far
Far from me you are
But will always be deep inside my heart
Steps in sand are gone with wind
Love left only unforgotten sweet harm
Blown away into the air
Gone forever
But the memories that we shared will never be
They will lay deep inside my mind and heart
Will never leave.

by Mrok(Gloom)Robert M and Vikki

[Jade Hustleman Jenius]

Awsome poem!

DJ

[Vikki]

thanx jason

[ericb]

I remember you  

Memory metor struck my mind
Sweetness stirs with bitterness in your voice
Your soft delicate touch
Innocent heart felting look
Desire to hold you close
Feel your warm frame
Hearts beating in a rhythm like no other
Souls connecting, hearts connecting and minds connecting
Deep into each others thoughts.
Cold tear is cutting your smiling face
You are leaving me
Alone I will be
Nothing to do
No one to turn to
Your photo burning it’s place in heart
Always so close but so far
Far from me you are
But will always be deep inside my heart
Steps in sand are gone with wind
Love left only unforgotten sweet harm
Blown away into the air
Gone forever
But the memories that we shared will never be
They will lay deep inside my mind and heart
Will never leave.

by Mrok(Gloom)Robert M and Vikki

That is awesome.God bless you always.

[Vikki]

thanx for the comment eric.

[uniqueandalanis4]

i just love it love it just love it !!!!great job!!rock on!

[Vikki]

thanx for the comment april im glad u love it
Posted on: August 02, 2008, 02:18:39 PMwooooooo jason,eric and april like our poem yay lol thanx guys ur comments are grt.

[hazel681]

WOWIE WOW WOW thats amazzzzzzzzzing. like amazing amazing amazing! i love it lots. you both were made to write together!!

[Vikki]

haha thanx sis love ur comment thanx everyone for taking time to come and comment

[hazel681]

haha your welcome! and thanks i do make radical comments dont i? hahaha im just kidding, my ego isnt that big  great job again!

[Mrok(Gloom)Robert M]

Thank you everyone for comments... Well... ummm... They makes me happy... Lols... I am glad you enjoyed...

[dutchgirlfan]

yeah its good....nice describtion of good memories.

[Vikki]

thanx bianca

[hazel681]

keep writing together pleassssse! such a beautiful poem write more write more!

[Vikki]

haha thanx sis . we will