Topic: Another poem from Rob and Vikki enjoy :)

[Vikki]

Angel's Advice
I let myself come here alone
All against me
I don't know what to do or say
Voice dont fallow thoughts will
I feel so helpless
who do I turn to?
too many thoughts
I should have brought friends
What force let me ignore their advices?
too much pride standing in the way
I fear what to do next
My feelings are so helpless
I see a light before me
Glistening ahead
l look up
Different thought enter my mind
I feel like i can help
I see a way
Maybe give you advice
Listen to me
Let me speak
Open your ears
I'm trying to help
Take my advice
Move on

enjoy

by Mrok(Gloom)Robert M and Vikki

     

[TREYROCKS22]

Good job u two

if more ppl had such wisdom the world would be a better place

[Vikki]

thanx trey

[uniqueandalanis4]

  i think i get the point hahahhaha?am i right? its beautiful!!!!!!!!!good job to the both of you!!!woooooooooohooooooo o

[Vikki]

haha lol
thanx for ur comment april

[Mrok(Gloom)Robert M]

Yep... I attach my thanks too lols

[dutchgirlfan]

this one is really...strange..g hehe in a positive way; its like you switch from one person to another. The way I see it its like you dont want help....cauz you are too pride but on the other hand you offer help to someone else; almost begging to give support to someone else but for yourself you're refusing... or you could see it like; someone needs help; refusing it and someone whose offering help to taht someone...

nice one to think about... I can relate to it; in the both ways I read it

write on

[hazel681]

great job i love how different it is!!!!!!! keeep writing
you guys are freakin magic!

[Vikki]

awww thanx sis.

[ericb]

Wonderful. Simply wonderful.Keep writing.

[Jesse]

Vikki, I didn't know you wrote! Good job y'all! It's nice!

[Vikki]

thanx eric.

thanx jesse

i don't really write alot jesse. i'm not like a writer or anything. i just write with people such as rob and i have written with keri to .

[hazel681]

you havent written with meeee yet 

[dutchgirlfan]

and we also still have to write Hazel

[Vikki]

i know sis. don't worry we will write together.