Topic: Breathe again

[ummm]

The night I found you
in all but smiling light
a tear fell from my eyes in your pain
I wrapped my arms around you

We spoke of change and all the world
together, forever
our dream as it would go

your face a glow with a million kisses
the ones I placed right there
My heart will always have found you
Dreaming of a place you belonged

and now I'm left with out you love
trying to make you breathe again
just once upon this lonely face

The world is cold and more of nothing
no smiles or sweet repent
I miss you always upon my lips
with every breath I have spent without you

[Greek]

"I look up to the sun
it only hurts my eyes,
maybe its the answer
i've been wanting in disguise"
-Automatic Loveletter, The Answer

love you Umah
hold on tight

[ummm]

x

[Vikki]

tht is absolutly brilliant grt job. deep, emotional, and sends out a clear message. well done

[be_ki]

Sweetheart that is the single saddest thing I have ever read. It is as beautiful as you are. Hang in there tush x

[dutchgirlfan]

oooh my sweetheart....my heart's with you.....I am here for you.. when you need a hug, a chat..or what else you can think of.

Take care sweetheart.

[Tj_pinkgurl]

Thats really good. I love the kinda... peace-ness but sad-ness  in it if that makes sense. This is my fave part

"The night I found you
in all but smiling light
a tear fell from my eyes in your pain
I wrapped my arms around you"

[Mrok(Gloom)Robert M]

A lot of spirit in it... Sweet memory in butter of bitter need and maybe even loss... Falling in love really has something with falling and wish to fly...  The ending is marvelous... It can break or put heart back into whole from pieces... Write on...