Topic: Poem from me :)

[Vikki]

yh but well its ok but well...

[dutchgirlfan]

i´ll wait and see

gotta go now

good luck!

[Vikki]

ok bye take care lol *grabs the luck with both hands* lol
Posted on: October 10, 2008, 10:36:04 AMrite this is an attempt at a song lol.

i will

i will succeed
in life
no matter what you say
i will live my dreams
i will achieve something

say what you like
you can hit me with your words
but that wont stop me
i have motivation
determination
something you can't take away from meee

chorus
you put me down
and make me feel so sad, with what you say
but that won't stop me at all
coz i am who i am
i will succeed

i will live my life in every single way
you cannot take my dreams away from meee
you say i won't succeed
well you are wrong
and i will prove im righttt.

i will be someone
i will do my thing
you won't ever change me
coz i am who i am

chorus

[Jesse]

Aw! Vikki it's so cute!! I love it!! I think it could be longer, but other then that it's great!!

[Vikki]

aww thanx jesse means alot . yh well i can always work on it and make it longer lol. many plans i have lol.

[Jesse]

Do you have a tune for it?

[Vikki]

kinda in my head. but not on a guitar or piano or anything.

[Jesse]

well, yeah, that's what i meant, in your head. lol.  it's very singable, i think. for me, anyways.

[Vikki]

haha well u should have a go at recording urself singing it lol i would love to hear ur version to it.

[Jesse]

lol, it's not complete for me to sing it, haha, write a bridge and we'll talk!

[Vikki]

lmfao lol. well i will end up adding more to it lol . tomorrow sometime maybe lol.

[Jesse]

lol, you do that.

[Vikki]

o i will lol.

[dutchgirlfan]

but girl...if you like it like that then you shouldnt change it cauz then its perfect. I like it because it´s really....ehmz...co mbative to others, you have faith in yourself which is really noticable in your song. good job.

[Vikki]

awww thanx B means alot, im glad u liked it .