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just a little something
« on: October 17, 2008, 12:54:12 AM »
yeah, this is just a little something i wrote the other day. i'm not really good at expressing my thoughts or feelings on paper[or internet haha] so hopefully this doesnt suck :smiley15:, i usually dont share my writings or anything, but i thought why not give it a chance. haha im thinking of turning it into a song if i can think of something to add. but yeah, its kinda to/about my dad. its a long story, but yeahhh.



i never meant to hurt you.
i just needed my space.
you took it all the wrong way
and shut my out completely.
if you had listened to what i was saying,
instead of what you werent hearing,
maybe we could move on from this,
and let our hearts start healing.

Re: just a little something
« Reply #1 on: October 17, 2008, 09:57:03 AM »
well shelby although that is small. tht is amazing tht there has deep pure emotion in it and really sends out a clear message. i hope things work out between u and ur dad. grt job , well done :)


woooohooo who made moi sig? Julia did!!, wooop yayy for Julia Joy/JJ!! lol

Re: just a little something
« Reply #2 on: October 17, 2008, 02:36:43 PM »
I agree with Vikki on whole line... You gave it very good chance.. cos it really has a clear message... With little expansion and talent you can make great art from it.. and turn it into song shape... You are on good track.. so... keep it up :)

I am always in debts to Kelly... She put a spell on my heart, so I will make my life a spell to give it back...

Re: just a little something
« Reply #3 on: October 17, 2008, 05:08:21 PM »
yeah it sgood...nice flow, nice rhyme ( I like rhyme you should see my poems :P :P) and you know....people just...feel when something is written with feelign i suppose
We will never forget....
Rest in Peace sweet Bo.


Re: just a little something
« Reply #4 on: October 17, 2008, 06:43:21 PM »
nice job shelbster. haha were talking on aim now ;]

 

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