Topic: Days

[kelly_rocks]

Days

Days go by and you are as happy as can be and I'm still stuck in a shadow of what we used to be. Wishing that I could come out but to scared of what others would think of me without you next to me.

[hazel681]

i love its simplicity and its feeling!
keep writing more anna!

[ericb]

Short and sweet. I like your wording.God bless and keep writing.

[Vikki]

as i said in chat to you Anna. it sounds good and although it's short and simple it has good flow and good emotion, i love it great job

please write more

[Mrok(Gloom)Robert M]

For me it sounds like a great beginning of a song.. I love the sounds of it.... and message is really touchy... It has power even now... but you can try to expand it

[dutchgirlfan]

i like it because its so short...and like vikki said; it has a good flow. Its fragile which makes it beautiful