Topic: Soundless Surface

[hazel681]

secrets between past lovers who last
never seem to live on
your words unsound
as if the page lost its voice
dont tell no one
our secret left there on the ground
its a soundless surface

you said you loved me
then you left with the noise you'd leave
you didnt give me a chance to say that
that i loved you back

theres a hole in my chest
when you told me that i could live
as if you never existed
but i have kissed those cheeks
its true that we live on
but each second is closer to us dying fast
im begging you dont do this
i need you just know
i want you back
closing in to crush the raw wounds
the pages couldnt say it as well as you

you've been there so long
i dont want to live on
i will give you a chance to think that
you took it with you when you left it
on this soundless surface
ive felt those hands pull back
im still dying fast
secrets between past lovers who last
never seem to live on

[since_you_been_kelly]

wow thats real good hazel i like it

[uniqueandalanis4]

hazel''hazel''hazel''

I LOVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEE IT SO MUCH!!!!you wrote that so well so beautiful''but so sad..!!!but that's how it go's right?!!i dont even know anymore lol..it frikkin rocks''awesome awesome''jOb girl!!!!and i can most def relate!!!!

[ericb]

I agree April.

[hazel681]

thanks guys 
Posted on: 15-05-2009, 18:06:10there's no word for what happened
there's no good side of it
i'll find a word and take it back
and search for the good side for you

if I stay i'll do it all
if I go i just dont know
i will try too hard and find an answer
its okay if youre done fighting
i'll fight for you im never done

past lived songs creep up my door
i dont want to write a song for you
but i can take on forever as itself
i will meet those songs and write you one

the sun prepares us for shadows
along with the melodies that bursts through
i will prepare for a shadow
try and stay for me

if you stay you have my heart
if you go, wherever you go
just know we can never part as forever is known
but if you choose to go i will wait
til i run out of words for me

[Mrok(Gloom)Robert M]

*Puts glasses with lenses huge like bottles*... Yo yo yo.. its your bro:)... All I can say for now... I am speechless lol... and what to add... Even inside shining makes letters huge... I gotta run.. umm.. byes

[hazel681]

thanks rob
new poem coming soon!

[Mrok(Gloom)Robert M]

Sounds delicious lol

[hazel681]

its your time again
to let it break or bend
see seasons walk like they are drinking oh whoa

dont ask me this
im not the only one
who thinks boats are sinking where
no one dares to look

its so strange how losing all the names
didnt make the people run and scream
its only a sound
names are only drawn from a hat
so start drawing cuz the people are growing
restless, restless, restless

they're all crowded now
dropping like glass from shelves
the world is lying
they just like
painting illusions in a kaleidoscope
Posted on: 10-07-2009, 22:22:21this song is unfinished
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you wander around so poisoned
its bringing us down, get down
here comes the massacre we've been waiting for
lingering around the corner
but its such a ravenous night
its the one we waited for

the bloodshed of all time
pre war streets in a post war city
so tell all the children to go to sleep
they will wake up to a new world
you will pay for your mistakes

[ericb]

Hiya hazel,long time no see.how are you? i hope you will continue to write for us.

[Vikki]

all are awesome i honestly didnt see this topic , sorry girl. but read them and they are great , as usual u are a fantastic talented writer. Keep on writing girl.

[hazel681]

scratch the unfinisihed song. here it is:::

Maps and Braille

everytime your there
i wait a little for you
just too see whats on your mind
if your ready to go
i see your veins they look streets

but you already know
your missing out on this
regret scars over you
its like the braille on your skin
and i said im sorry
and that was all i knew how to say

the floor is close to my face
but i dont mind it
vertigo comes to comfort me
i decided im ready to go
i see my reflection but its not me


but you already know
your missing out on this
regret scars over you
its like the braille on your skin
i used my cards
and thats all i knew how to play

you call my name
i wont answer
because the braille on my skin
shows too much
i see your skin it looks like maps

[Vikki]

wow awesome , great emotion , great flow, great job girl. well done.

[Mrok(Gloom)Robert M]

I was so waiting for it that I failed when you showed up lol... I can blame number of choices I made, but... Did somebody told you today that you are brilliant?... Its been some time when I read your poems and still I am shocked over depth and match of your poems and songs scratches to nowadays life problems... Hmmm... you have great sense on humanity... It takes much of my energy to try seeing such details in them... It wasn't so hard before... I guess I changed... shifted some priorities... Anyway... You are shining with professionalism... Its not only words choice... I think words choice is the easiest and obvious part of your arts... Just ask about shape, idea and level of your writting and you can hear only admiration with minimum risk of criticism... Maybe you made some little spelling there... somewhere... lol... Maybe I need magnifying glass... hehe... I think its a mark of a writing master when reader feels worried and in strong tension while learning emotions from poems and songs... I guess I can admit that I feel bad in words to explain what your arts are doing with me... I guess I can try to close it in sentence that your magic can wake up heart and warm soul.... You deserve title of Girl from Heaven Sky lol...

[hazel681]

thanks rob hahaha you are awesome!
new song coming soon