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"Remember I'm Here"
« on: June 09, 2009, 03:46:54 AM »
HI EVERYONE.  I USE TO WRITE A LOT OF POEMS AND SONGS HERE AND THEN I GOT MAJOR WRITERS BLOCK LOL SO ANYWAY THIS IS THE FIRST POEM I'VE WRITTEN IN QUITE A WHILE.
HOPE YOU LIKE THE POEM :) TELL ME WHAT YA THINK.

OH AND I HAVEN'T NAMED IT YET LOL CAN'T THINK OF A TITLE. (Now has a name :D )

___________________ ___________________ ___________________ ____

Remember I'm here



Hi you probably don't know me but i've seen you around
And whenever I see you, you always look down..
I just have some questions that I hope will make me understand
But I need honest answers; so please take my hand,
Lets go for a walk, don't worry I won't interrogate
I just want to talk .. well really to investigate.
Whats going on? Why are you always angry?
Shhhh please don't cry, you know you can trust me;
You don't want to talk yet ... OK I get it, that's fair ...
You know I've watched you grow up; you just never noticed me there.
You once were so happy, young and carefree
But since you've grown older and understand more, you seem to have lost me.
I hear you crying when you think no-one listens,
And im there when you're knocked back by another life lesson;
And I know when you think life is a little too tough
Because I'm the one that convinces you that you've not had enough;
So please speak to me, you need to tell someone
Soon it will be too late and the damage will be done..
You're crying again .. I wish I could give you a hug.
You always feel like nobody cares but yet your guards always up.
What was that? Sorry what did you say?.. Why do I care?
Well I've seen how things end and you're much happier there;
You feel this broken now like it's dark and you're lost in the crowd,
And then when you need somebody there is no-one around;
You're so fragile and scared, and the world seems so big
And in the rush of it all it is easy to forget,
That you're never alone because beside you there's me;
Im your guardian angel, the inner voice that never gets seen.
« Last Edit: August 18, 2009, 10:02:06 AM by I-am-@ddicted »

sig made by Juliakelly05, go check her graphics out she rawks ;)
Kelly concerts: **23rd Feb 06**26th March 08** Met Kelly**

Re: Not named the poem yet :P but please read
« Reply #1 on: June 09, 2009, 08:27:37 AM »
wow , its great, lovely flow , emotion , everything, pleasant to read. Good job.


woooohooo who made moi sig? Julia did!!, wooop yayy for Julia Joy/JJ!! lol

Re: Not named the poem yet :P but please read
« Reply #2 on: June 18, 2009, 02:19:13 PM »
I like its style... Its making it outstanding in form... Great idea with putting parts like direct from conversation... It makes it more alive... I mean... you can feel more like a witness of poem story... Lines seems too long for me... but this is just comparison to my style... so I believe that it wins by being more melodious and like fresh written from heart... I wish you more such ideas...

I am always in debts to Kelly... She put a spell on my heart, so I will make my life a spell to give it back...

Re: Not named the poem yet :P but please read
« Reply #3 on: July 18, 2009, 03:44:57 PM »
that's an amazing poem Katrina, i love the style in how you written it and it's so emotional, directly from your heart. i missed your poems so much, they're always amazing to read. well done ;)
:D ♥ I love my bestfriend/sister/soulmate Brooke *hugs* :D

Re: Not named the poem yet :P but please read
« Reply #4 on: July 19, 2009, 07:03:39 AM »
         Thanks for sharing.

Re: Not named the poem yet :P but please read
« Reply #5 on: July 27, 2009, 07:31:28 PM »
HI EVERYONE.  I USE TO WRITE A LOT OF POEMS AND SONGS HERE AND THEN I GOT MAJOR WRITERS BLOCK LOL SO ANYWAY THIS IS THE FIRST POEM I'VE WRITTEN IN QUITE A WHILE.
HOPE YOU LIKE THE POEM :) TELL ME WHAT YA THINK.

OH AND I HAVEN'T NAMED IT YET LOL CAN'T THINK OF A TITLE.

___________________ ___________________ ___________________ ____


Hi you probably don't know me but i've seen you around
And whenever I see you, you always look down..
I just have some questions that I hope will make me understand
But I need honest answers; so please take my hand,
Lets go for a walk, don't worry I won't interrogate
I just want to talk .. well really to investigate.
Whats going on? Why are you always angry?
Shhhh please don't cry, you know you can trust me;
You don't want to talk yet ... OK I get it, that's fair ...
You know I've watched you grow up; you just never noticed me there.
You once were so happy, young and carefree
But since you've grown older and understand more, you seem to have lost me.
I hear you crying when you think no-one listens,
And im there when you're knocked back by another life lesson;
And I know when you think life is a little too tough
Because I'm the one that convinces you that you've not had enough;
So please speak to me, you need to tell someone
Soon it will be too late and the damage will be done..
You're crying again .. I wish I could give you a hug.
You always feel like nobody cares but yet your guards always up.
What was that? Sorry what did you say?.. Why do I care?
Well I've seen how things end and you're much happier there;
You feel this broken now like it's dark and you're lost in the crowd,
And then when you need somebody there is no-one around;
You're so fragile and scared, and the world seems so big
And in the rush of it all it is easy to forget,
That you're never alone because beside you there's me;
Im your guardian angel, the inner voice that never gets seen.



Omgoodness this Is Brillant!!!!!!!!!!!It's sooo Deep and i can relate ''woah such Beautiful word's!!!! I Loveeeee It!!!and i  so enjoyed reading it!!!nice work !!awesome!:):) ;) :P ;D ;D ;D

Posted on: July 27, 2009, 07:26:39 PM
:)?maybe the name can be '''......''' Remember Im Here?:) just a thought :)
kEllY ClArKsOn iS My WoRLd..
RoCkOn KeLL..xoxo

God BlesS yoU xo.....

Re: Not named the poem yet :P but please read
« Reply #6 on: August 18, 2009, 10:00:10 AM »

Posted on: July 27, 2009, 07:26:39 PM
:)?maybe the name can be '''......''' Remember Im Here?:) just a thought :)

Oh I like it :D That will be the poems name lol

sig made by Juliakelly05, go check her graphics out she rawks ;)
Kelly concerts: **23rd Feb 06**26th March 08** Met Kelly**

 

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