Topic: Penguin Lover is back with a new poem

[Penguin Lover]

I took out my name out of my username but hopefully some of you still recognize me. I wrote some poems way back and for some reason I wrote one today. The working title is Sweet Innocence Post Adolescence but I might change it.

Sweet Innocence Post Adolescence

Mentioning you unwillingly brought back
Every deep seeded emotion I've had
Each conversation and surprise attack
I've made to sabotage the launching pad

Of our then  impeding relationship
For I was confused and terrified
So I keep quiet for "loose lips sink ships"
Or my pride kept me from feeling denied

Still it won't matter if I can't admit
Or confess to the depression and guilt
That forced us both to take a massive hit
But I refuse to just let this love wilt

For I still contain sweet innocence
That we'll be lovers post adolescence

[Mrok(Gloom)Robert M]

Many heart beats to study your heart work lol... I bet you gave it even far more... Every reading is just an element in comparison... You made it perfect from alone discover of its deep message... Now its dressed in accurately chosen words on well crafted frame... Hmmm... I must admit I am not sure if there should be double *then* in the middle... It varies on meaning... I cant say I am that good English though... Hmmm... I am even worse in memory of names... At least I am not that confident to spoil my best guess lol... and for biological clock sake... my time is just running out... Still thanks for crowning my day with so well written and wondrous poem... I know I was looking here today and I was surprised I find your trace lol... like hand reflection on magical doors lol... Anyway... awesome job... I better go... Recommended eyes close is keeping well mood tomorrow lol... Nite 

[Penguin Lover]

thanks for the kinds words. the double "then" was just a typo. my bad. i'll go fix it now.

[ericb]

That's very good.Welcome back Kelcey.