Topic: some stuff i wrote

[hurleygirl550]

alright so here's some stuff i wrote...let me know what you guys think....

"strong"

my thoughts of you are leaving
you have done your deceiving
i'm not so naive
just walk away

i can't hear you
don't come close
your face is killing me
slowly move away

i said just get out
hit the curb
i'm not pretending anymore

you are fake
this ploy won't take me
here is your heart
back in your hand

I'm out!


"puzzle piece"

Give me a hunger
that stirs my heart to feel
this real love you have given me
i can't deny your grace

show me your face
unveil your heart to me
so i can see what you have destined me to be
take my hand and let me see


Lord you are the eternal one
I don't need anyone but you
So show me how to be real
Take my heart it's yours

This piece of the puzzle is not complete
Put me together
Create in me a masterpiece
That's radiant and full of life


You are the one
God of this whole earth
Pull me close so I can hear you whisper
The words I love you

[dancingminds]

hmm i dunno why here`s no comments
it`s rly cool what you wrote rly nice job

[Crazy4Kelly]

thats cool, good job.

[Dreamer]

Aswome peom love it love it love it

[bombshellbrizie]

beautiful writing.  i've been writing for about 10 years now, i love poetry!

[sammyh103]

great job, keep it up!

[pt_star]

Yeah! These are really nice poems! 

[Thera]

I've also wrote a few poems, these are a few of them:

I?ll Fantasize

I?ll fantasize
Of a real guy
Not just any guy
I?ll fantasize
He looks imaginary
But it?s a real guy

I?ll fantasize
He?s my dream guy
I?ll love him
I?ll fantasize
He stands next to me

I?ll fantasize
We?ll dance,
And kiss
We?ll swim together
We?ll kiss
That?s something I
Don?t want  to miss

I?ll fantasize
Till the full moon

I?ll fantasize
 

My Secret Admirer

I?ve got a sign
A special sign
It?s my sign
A sign of love,
The invisible love
My secret admirer

He brought me chocolates
I think the whole day,
Who should It be
The neighbour next door,
Maybe a friend
I don?t know
My secret admirer

I?ve got a sign
A special sign
It?s my sign
A sign of love,
The invisible love
My secret admirer

The next day
He brought me roses
With a letter
It says:
?For my love, someone special?
Regards
Secret admirer

I?ve got a sign
A special sign
It?s my sign
A sign of love,
The invisible love
My secret admirer

The final day
There?s a letter in my mailbox
It says again:
?For my love, someone special?
but there?s more
?Come to the beach, I?ll
be waiting for you?
On the beach
There?s a man
My secret Admirer



Run away

I?m afraid
Afraid of you
?Let me go!?
I run away
Don?t let me stay
I?ll just run away

I?ll hate you
Don?t hold me
Because I don?t stay
?Let me go?
Just let me go
Further, and further
Far away

I?m afraid
Afraid of you
?Let me go!?
You don?t give about me
Please,
don?t let me stay
I?ll just run away

You kicked me,
Instead of hold me
?I?ll hate you?
You hit me,
I?ll never forget It
?I?ll hate you?

I?ll run away
Far away
Far away, from you
I just ran away



Someone

It?s like there?s someone
Someone who looks at me
I can feel it
I can?t take it
I feel a cold breeze

There?s someone
Someone I don?t know
It feels strange,
I?m afraid
There?s someone
I don?t trust it

It?s like there?s someone
Someone who looks at me
I can feel it
I can?t take it
I feel a cold breeze

I see something
A shadow,
It?s someone
Is it supernatural
I?m afraid

It?s someone
Someone I can feel
And It?s so real
It scares me

Oo oo oo

Ow no

Someone
Someone
Someone



Your truth identity

A dark day
The river is wild
Dark or white
What determines it

A dark day
The sea becomes wild
Insulted and booed
Why do they do that?

A dark day
The ocean is savage
Teased and teased
Over and over
Sorrow goes lost in water

Can you stay
Or must you leave
Where do you belong
Here or there?

What is you truth identity?


So these were my poems, I hope you liked them, I think I'm not very good at this. With the last one I've won a rose on school, It's about discrimination and bullying (I've been bullied myself, so I can relay to that subject, so I think that's the reason I've won.

YOU FOUND ME KELLY, YOU FOUND A DIE HARD KELLY-FAN!!!
FOR ALL I KNOW YOUR MY BEAUTIFUL DISASTER KELLY!!!
ANYTIME YOU SEE KELLY, YOU LOVE KELLY!!!

[Matt]

WOW!!! they are awesome! have some karma!

[Thera]

Thanx matt, YOU ROCK!!!

[Matt]

hey you rock more! i mean those poems are just awesome! and your quotes! and your songs! and your posters! the list goes on and on...

[Thera]

hahaha. No you rock more, you so nice and a great kelly fan this list also goes on and on.

[Matt]

woowoo! thanks!

[Thera]

Here is one more poem that I wrote yesterday. So here it is. I hope you enjoy it.

                                            06-05-2006, 1.45 AM 
The Distance

I?ve met someone
On a chat
We just went there
Just like another day
We?re together on the chat

We?ve talked and
Changed from chat
We talked very much
We like each other
But we thought
Could this ever be love?

We?ve talked for a few days
We keep talking about anything
We?ve got a lot in common
So we keep flirting
Without knowing we did that

Then there came a special day
We chatted almost the whole day
We?ve talked about our friendship
We?re do we stand?
Do we love each other?

The answer was positive
We said ?I love you?
To each other

But then it happened
The distance
It?s keeping us apart
But we love each other
I can?t live without his love
I just love him

He?s in my heart
I?m also in you heart
But we can?t see each other
The distance
It?s splitting us up
But he?s my knight on my white horse
I just keep saying I love him
But it doesn?t works

Because of the distance
That?s what?s torn us apart
The distance   

[Matt]

woowoo!!! i love them! they are beautiful!