Topic: Short poem size of a sentence i made

[Pieces of a dream]

Love is like a mountain hard to climb but when you get to the top the view is beatifull

[ericb]

        Short sentence.Alot and I mean ALOT of meaning.  

[I-am-@ddicted]

Wow!! short but so effective!  and thinking about its so true so that makes it better .. awesome!

[Pieces of a dream]

I know its like saying a picture tells a thousand words 

[ericb]

     Something doesn't have to be long to have alot of meaning.The Bible is filled with proverbs that are short but have much meaning.Thesame is true with what you've posted here.God Bless.  

[Mrok(Gloom)Robert M]

Uh, You really hit the point . If You add new lines you would make subject more detailed and such thought like thinking about Kelly as my love mountain top just wouldn't happen , because it would not fit.Thanks . I am taking it as some kind of a lesson . I am afraid I am not finding myself even on low shelf of this mountain :'(, but I trust I am wright saying that Kelly happiness takes first place... she deserves .