Topic: Poems from Angel of Sorrow...

[hazel681]

 
what are you talking about blush on my cheeks??
you dont know what my complextion is! what are you talking about!

[Mrok(Gloom)Robert M]

what are you talking about blush on my cheeks??
you dont know what my complextion is! what are you talking about!

Got ya ... Hahahahahahahahahah a ... I went too deep with my joking ... Maybe a bit too far ... Sorry ... I think its all that I feel so tired ... I think... I can be a bit like... ummm... less in control ... Nvm... but... well... dont feel so safe with your cheeks guarded by gifted colour... Embarrassment can paint your soul ... And you can always blush here virtually... hihihihi ... Situation is more important than visual effect ... So... I dare to say that someone can make your cheeks blush into colour of henna even if you are black like ebony ... Haha... I am so mean ... jk... Dont worry... Well... I mean not about me... but... someday... someone will do it... I mean something good for you... Maybe it will be at the wedding ... Many people stress about it and especially when its happening... Good luck to you ... and smile... you little dork ... A lot before ya... Meanwhile.... its dorky Friday......... I feel as tired as ancient wheel that forgot to stop with end of its era... So... I will stop by some bed... and........ .....

[hazel681]

haha its ok robert, and i dont have to wait. love has already painted my cheeks :p

[Mrok(Gloom)Robert M]

 

[uniqueandalanis4]

I hope you will enjoy them . Some of them are filled with gloom of my life :'(, but I hope you will find in them hope, strength and... love of course

Your glorious sunrise

You are like last sentence from God to me
Pointing out what I am supposed to be
You are like light I don't dare to watch at
Beautiful rays like from blue sunset
You are my gloomy life mystique prise
Smashing my dark like glorious sunrise


Unworldly coil

Make a look down from the sky
See the tiny spark that cant die
Believe in those eyes glaring at you
My complicated existence is true
I need help from an angel
My broken heart messenger
Born again because of God's call
Fighting with vision of my fall
Living in eternal sorrow
Trying to forseen tomorrow
I am just an angel made from tears
Dangerous when calling all fears
Warrior with sword made from soul
Drinking source of life from saint bowl
Holding his faith like unable to pierce shield
Standing against all evil on a world's field
With heart bruised by temptation aims
For my obedience darkness claims
I don't know what will come
Maybe I am a ticking bomb
Maybe by love I am cheated
By its power my blood is heated
Temperature is rising till it will boil
My explosion will create unworldly coil


Under your choice

Shattered into small pieces
Thrilled by your spirit kisses
Lost in emotions sea
Blown by your voice breeze
Shrank form respect to your choice
I lose my power to use my voice
Now it is your glorious time to rule me
It is your choice what will come to be


Undefined love

Did you ever know?
Love is to reach the top of the mountain
Did you ever know?
Love is to dive without fear of drowning
Did you ever hear?
To love someone is to give
Did you ever hear?
To be loved is to receive
Did you ever listen?
To voice of your heart in need
Did you ever listen?
To voice of dream moving your feet
Did you ever understand?
For what you are so Strong living
Did you ever understand?
For what you are so hard believing
Did you ever asked?
Who you are and what you want?
Did you ever asked?
Why you didn't fail and you don't?
Because I did and I am lost in thoughts
I have love kidnapped by my feelings floods
I have worries so many and of all kinds
Love definition is unreachable by any minds


Two mirrors spell

Glass the slowest liquid substance in this world
The magic spell is hidden in one small word
Crash, crash it into millions of sharp pieces
Falling on me like thousands of vampires kisses
Cutting my skin till blood and changing kind of pain
Physical one and from my loneliness are not the same
I am standing between two mirrors of my existence
I see my division and sense my feelings are so intense
Something is hidden behind each image I see
The one I will choose forever and ever will be
My rebellious soul want to change it all
I send to God my howling and inhuman call
I get what I wanted and don't know if its wrong
But I sense hope of redemption in one special song
The wave will come to me with flowered spring
I cant wait to hear how powerfully she sings

The way to save me

When the dust falls down
When fear of me is sown
When demon stands still
When everyone stops to kill
An angel slide from the sky
Like pure tear when you cry
Down deep into my heart core
Its unbelievable secretive lore
The flame takes control on my will
I cant resist such powerfull feel
The spell leads my desire
In my eyes it lights new fire
My thoughts change its way
I listen carefully what you say
I fear risk of your disappointment
I want you to feel really content
I trust light of hope you gave me
There is no other way to save me

I think its enough for... now. I am the 'cook', so please take a 'menu' and tell me what 'meal' is the most 'tasty'...

WOW  what great power brought me here ,now tonight?lol
i am loving your writting alot,there's so much meaning in each and every line you wrote in the second one''it's so powerfull i love it!!!!the first one i didnt want it to end lol ..beautiful writting!!

april*

[Mrok(Gloom)Robert M]

Eh... I think its your naughty character brought you here my silly little pixie with starry smile ... haha.. jk... but really... sensing your thoughts gives me dorky shivering ... Well... I guess the first had to end like that ... somehow light has its nature to defeat darkness lol... At least this dance of light and darkness never ends... Light likes to travel... Darkness likes to hug light... Yep... Brief story about them ... *Unworldly coil* is deep for sure... I feel like I can talk only about part of it ... Well... some power had to be stopped ... Whole in secret of possibilities tree... and what could happen... and what mistakes could be done... even by good intentions ... Not only my choice anyway ... Eh... Its one of my fav too ... Pity... Gives me a bit of kick of failure... but reminds me.. that I have to continue and fight for right choices ... with whole my heart ... or everything my soul contains will be lost... or... what can be the worst - used for wrong purpose... Unwritten is much more deep well of secrets than anything I can tell you ... Have fun scoping another ones... I think you can find some good pieces among pile of my *soul coins*

Posted on: June 20, 2008, 11:51:32 PMIts... loss reaction... somehow written around magic hour... I am still confused... but I believe feelings are right...


Hugging the air

An angel smile for your beauty
Elephant tears cry for loss
Memory painting on duty
Blush of what we had once

Cloud of sadness to cuddle my Sun
Cold rain to cover eternal eyes
My spirit love to give you more fun
Now you are one with endless light

I spare more than words in your direction
May power of pray lift golden ladder
You deserved Seventh Heaven section
Proud warrior humbly asks Father

Stripes of rainbow falls down and melt
Sound whispers to weak up new path
Unseen guide leads your faith
Milky light sphere bound gate of life

Broken heart spoils love on ground
Flower arises always after
Time out there seems round
Sensing it from here is harder

Thrown feather reached this world
Invisible gesture to strengthen my believe
I will meet you countless time more
Must be predicted time before my leave

So deep and coded message in your whole life
Every heart beat writting down my friend tale
Wide and divided description of pure heart
Something special and hard to say

Empty piece begging for more of your care
Conscious mind to let you rest
Performed pray for you there
Let your memory be blessed

[hazel681]

oooooooooh that makes me calm very soothing and nice its incredible you are one of the those writers who can express anything and everything with the perfect words. its very rare and you should be happy that you have such a great gift in your soul

[dutchgirlfan]

at this very moment you let my heart cry with this poem robert. Like Hazel said it's also making you calm, but thats why it also make you think, flow you away to the world of your own soul which at this moment is taken over by this feeling of missing someone.
Write on.

[Mrok(Gloom)Robert M]

It was like last idea I will come back to this... exact place... but it seems I have reason to make new update... After quite long break... Well... I feel bizarre... so in preview... poem is bizarre too... Well... enjoy... I guess...

*Whats your name?*

I cant find myself in this mess...
I need more than patience...
I am freaky alone against like everything...
So what that I can destroy and tear appart...
Useless skills when it comes to... love(?)...
But... isnt my different, alienated soul taken so so far?...
I come into games...
Gather hurt...
Carelessly love everyone...
I dont fit expectations...
I am bizarre...

They love...
They hate...
I catch some pieces...
I learn new samples of formula...
Do I actually understand?...
One pure destiny in my eyes...
Hidden, unknown...
Even for my mind...

After eight comes nine...
Infinity belly breaks...
Voice open cage...
I swallowed sound...
Guide blind tool to forge shining monument...
You are the key...
For fulfillment...
Still...
I think I dont know your name...

[hazel681]

its very powerful!! great great job as always. you show truth and unique style in your poem wonderful job!

[dutchgirlfan]

waauw...right on...love all the question your asking, i feel doubt, a bit fear, a desiring to get thins clear.

strong written Robert.

Take care hang on, go for it.

[Mrok(Gloom)Robert M]

its very powerful!! great great job as always. you show truth and unique style in your poem wonderful job!

waauw...right on...love all the question your asking, i feel doubt, a bit fear, a desiring to get thins clear.

strong written Robert.

Take care hang on, go for it.

Eh... It feels great to get comments from such awesome writers like you two:).. Damm it... I should told ya it long ago... at least in chatroom... Oh well... With ask for apology for my huge delay... You drill my thoughts... I am glad I give you some pleasure lols ...

And now... a little update... First some randomness from my writting saves... I dont have time, will and strength to name it or give it some order... so... try to read... and maybe even give comment...


Torn firecamp flame tune up glitter of thoughtfull eyes
World is blurred from flashing of yellow, red and green lights
Brought out tear boils on burned up cheek
Bouquet of thoughts is fading from this year fall music

Perky moth lost its way from heat
Hopelessly you see the end in glow
Now you learn soothing dead in fulfillment
Deaf emptiness and sad cinder after vain fire

Gentle bronze tremble wile pounding salty coins on floor
Green gem is sobbing in tired statue
You run into bitter misery from smile wealth
Cheated butterfly is sneezing from oversweeten pollen

You left illusive dress on forest path
I will not find a sorceress who wear it
Lost innocence in love games sense
Restless grave awaits lies effect

I look for your hands with blindfolded eyes
I scratch fingers on truth sharp thorns
Enlighten love turns to be forbidden apple fruit
Heart breaking is a signal for volley

I am dieing on your theater scene
Grief is corroding rest of tenderness
Blurred sight recover purity
I mark moments in wrong dates

I regret yesterday by forgetting tomorrow
Part payment by every heavy breath gasp
Lonely lute sounds rule my life flame
Dieing seed in lifeless dust


I am thinking a lot about you
Breaking my mistakes like ice on mountain shelf
Avalanche of tears to reach your hands of care
I stand here waiting for sign
lead me to your thoughts place
Lovely kiss will stop the time
Love forever in our hug


But here I have something recent... One girl in this world sharpen my focus... and still gives me unworldly inspiration... so... I dedicate huge thanks to her... cos this poem wouldnt happen without her... like all hope she is giving me...


All around you and me

Would you smile if you saw me coming out from dust of commet blow
If imagined star dust pieces were falling gently on your hands
If my invisible love was written and hidden in atmosphere crawl
And if my life would walk through craters from firing sonic guns

I want this world to fall from my will invasion
I want people to give me space to move
I want bridge to fullfill my mission
I need to carry my love need through

Hold my hand on the mountain top edge
Dont let me fly into ghosts sphere
Happiness flower grows on rocky ledge
Disconnection generates soul disrupting fear

Heavy hand moves up to fall back
Shivering force is raining
World can shake from my words cracks
Now its just a training

[dutchgirlfan]

you choose really intersting words. I always love your word choice... but I have to say I really miss the articles like; A sign instead of just sign. I stand here waiting for sign
anywayz...your first one is asad...it feels like youre waiting for someone you really love which is making you sad...and you are really negative about yourself which makes this poem sad in my opinion. Im sorry if im completely missing the point abuot this poem.

I really like the 2nd poem, you switched from rhyme scheme like; you mostly used the AABB rhyme scheme but now you didnt do that which is a nice variation. I can't say exactly what the poem is about... but I feel you want something desperatly; that you can do what you really want to do and that you want love if im right but you still want people who can save you from falling.
Anwyaz..again really nice words, you describe interesting images whcih tell alot about yourself. Really good.

ooh and about the delay; I will forgive ofcourse

[Mrok(Gloom)Robert M]

you choose really intersting words. I always love your word choice... but I have to say I really miss the articles like; A sign instead of just sign. I stand here waiting for sign
anywayz...your first one is asad...it feels like youre waiting for someone you really love which is making you sad...and you are really negative about yourself which makes this poem sad in my opinion. Im sorry if im completely missing the point abuot this poem.

I really like the 2nd poem, you switched from rhyme scheme like; you mostly used the AABB rhyme scheme but now you didnt do that which is a nice variation. I can't say exactly what the poem is about... but I feel you want something desperatly; that you can do what you really want to do and that you want love if im right but you still want people who can save you from falling.
Anwyaz..again really nice words, you describe interesting images whcih tell alot about yourself. Really good.

ooh and about the delay; I will forgive ofcourse

Now you will have to forgive me all the time;)... I guess I would pull all the blame on my gf if not the fact that its me so addicted ... I cant be late only for her ... Anyway... Idk if I can care much for articles since I am such a rebel... I guess it comes from shape of my language... Only in English they are necessary... I can only promiss that I will try since you asked... You read the message of first poem very well.. Actually you described my feelings in more clear way than I could do basically... Still I guess that true story behind it is more deep... but... its personal and involves my girl... You were almost perfect with second poem... Your word *desperately* is like echo of my feelings then... I only meant that I dont want people to stand against my happiness... I was scared that disconnection was more the arrangement of some people than her choice... Its more complicated... I cant even put it all into words.... I have to take care of it... Love sustain whole my life... I cant go along without it like body dies without warmth ...

[dutchgirlfan]

haha okay...well if you dont like using articles then don't, I will adapt to your poems

Im glad I got the messag quite well and I understand that it is more complicated...somet imes words arent enough to describe the whole meaning of our lives.