Topic: **Empty**by Katrina Love

[I-am-@ddicted]

This is a new poem/lyrics that I finished yesterday and it describes how im feeling about my family ... or just broken families in gerneral and how they can make ya feel.  Hope ya like critacism and comments appreciated

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I use to be happy,
But I can

[Thera]

WOW, very powerful, well written Katrina that sucks how you feel, but i understand that it's hard, i'm so sorry for you, i hope everything goes better now with your family. *hugs*, btw i think you had a typing disorder in it, cuz you wrote "if" instead of "of" somewhere in there. but please write on, you're an amazing talented writer and i love you till death

[I-am-@ddicted]

WOW, very powerful, well written Katrina that sucks how you feel, but i understand that it's hard, i'm so sorry for you, i hope everything goes better now with your family. *hugs*, btw i think you had a typing disorder in it, cuz you wrote "if" instead of "of" somewhere in there. but please write on, you're an amazing talented writer and i love you till death

Thank you Thera love you too and where abouts in the poem was the mistake, so I can correct it cus I cant find it lol

[Thera]

Thank you Thera love you too and where abouts in the poem was the mistake, so I can correct it cus I cant find it lol

you're welcome, anytime, it's timeless, yeah thanks for loving me too, hehe the mistake is the word in yellow

I use to be happy,
But I can

[Mrok(Gloom)Robert M]

Ohhhhh... Dear Thera my Angel... I think you had dorky moment  ... cos it makes me really wonder how you saw *if*... when its not in Kathrina post  ... maybe she sent it to you with mistake... Or you did something absolutely inverted to what you were thinking... Maybe you have just some strong reason to lose focus and be so dorky  ... haha... What a mess  ... Anyway... beauty lyrics about family and painfull problems dear Angel Kathrina ... Keep on being amazing... and thanks for writting such meaningful stuff... Sometimes words can change much... but its a bit pity... cos it more depends on people how they see them... how they understand... and if they want to change something into better... Anyway such song like yours its a brick that can become foundation for better future... Write on

[ericb]

I think you're both great writers.You should write stories too. Katrina,I've said it before,you are the BEST writer on here,and that says alot,considering how talented you all are.God bless.

[I-am-@ddicted]

Ohhhhh... Dear Thera my Angel... I think you had dorky moment  ... cos it makes me really wonder how you saw *if*... when its not in Kathrina post  ... maybe she sent it to you with mistake... Or you did something absolutely inverted to what you were thinking... Maybe you have just some strong reason to lose focus and be so dorky  ... haha... What a mess  ... Anyway... beauty lyrics about family and painfull problems dear Angel Kathrina ... Keep on being amazing... and thanks for writting such meaningful stuff... Sometimes words can change much... but its a bit pity... cos it more depends on people how they see them... how they understand... and if they want to change something into better... Anyway such song like yours its a brick that can become foundation for better future... Write on

No Thera was right there was a mistake but I have edited and corrected it   And thank you for your comment, it was very beautiful

I think you're both great writers.You should write stories too. Katrina,I've said it before,you are the BEST writer on here,and that says alot,considering how talented you all are.God bless.

  seriously, this board is getting better and better with its talent, I have read loads of people that have recently posted and wow very impressed with their work.  But thank you Eric your comment means a lot

and Im really wanting to write a new story again but seriously have no idea what I canwrite it on?? any ideas members

[Mrok(Gloom)Robert M]

Hehe ... I owe Thera apologises ... She did good work by scoping it