Topic: No name

[Tj_pinkgurl]

*and didnt really know what I was writing*

No name

Replaying times in my mind
Ringing in my head forever there
Clouds fading they dissapear
Darkness comes with all my fear
Cant you see me ? I'm still crying
Didnt know I was so invisible

Couldnt you see what was going to happen?
You know you did this to me
Lights dimming, memories haunting
I wish they'd go away, get out of my mind
I cant forget you
Your there all the time

Wheres my strength gone?
You took it with you
You washed me away
Dont turn around and say all the lies
The truth just fades away
I dont want you here
You remain in my fear
Go away from me and never come back

Couldnt you see what was going to happen?
You know you did this to me
You closed your eyes
Forget my trys
I dont know you anymore
I wont talk
Your gone forever

I cant hear you
And I'll stay waiting for true life
Goodbye fairwell
I didnt know you

[Mrok(Gloom)Robert M]

Beauty mind can do a lot... even thrill its own consciousness ... Some special features of your unnamed song are value we give to those we love and disappointment when we found out that they dont care... Hmmm... most moments are like that... We fall in love... and it turns to be one way emotional stream... that dont come back ... like the perfect moment is only... when two rivers of love meet together and create something... that becomes connected one ... I guess the last lines forecast a change in your life into better... Write on... It helps you... It helps us... You shine... We can shine something good back 

[I-am-@ddicted]

another amazing poem!! keep it up!