Yeah... putting everything in one place... categorising... setting in order... has many good features for the owner... and for the peps that are about to see your work
... You want to add something missing to your poems... Lets try
... I guess the feeling that I can make you to add to *Really* as the new verse is... laughter from being so dorky
... Yeah... I can admit you make me smile from all you... lost in contradictions of hers own special spirit
... I hope you dont take my words wrong
... I know you see problem in all your embarrassment from diffrent attitude to fun
... but if you will take it easy... you can see that you can make irony from your feelings
... and make the laughter from fact how you are about to react
... and that you can be proud... cos you will have more satisfaction than us when you will defeat your little problem
... by making smile when you think you cant
... and telling yourself... *oh well... I will worry later... when nobody is about to get hurt*
... Uh... Idk if there is anything to add to your *Scream for help*... since its honest, caught feeling... turned into art... with great sense and talent
... It talks about important topic of opening yourself and all problems around it
... Yeah... I have my strong faith in kellyville family that they will help ya more than you expect
... Your story *In my thoughts is where I am* is incredible... I wonder how much its surrealistic and how much it speaks about your real senses experience
... cos you make it really well described... strong... and very emotional
... You are awesome writer... You should think about something really professional... and making it published... You have outstanding style... so you can try yourself in world of writers
... Some things dont have to close in dreams
.... Hmmm... Weird... I think i know this sentence from somewhere... I cant guess... but I think someone wise said that... so I guess it gives more reason for you to listen
