Topic: Craving

[dutchgirlfan]

yeah? you really think I say a lot? I try to be different cauz I have the feeling that lots tell the same just in different words.... but i'm glad you like it

[Mrok(Gloom)Robert M]

Yeah ... You really touch many topics ... reading your staff is like taking trip around world ... when its all you and all your thoughts ... Its great talent to be so interesting .. dont you think so?

[dutchgirlfan]

well I agree with you that it's all me and my thoughts.. talent... maybe yes..although I hve the feeling some are not that great. But im glad you like them

[Fiona682]

I read ur first two and i love them, i can relate to apposlutly everything in those first two (well as much as me being a reader can).Ur writing is fantatic but maybe that is because I am so morbid. and sorry about my spelling but i cant get the spell check to work, oh well.
And me give you advise? I can't even do that for myself.
RENT is a musical about people trying to fight AIDS it is fantastic, altough it is rated pg-13 and does have like 2 drug shots, which is what is so awful.Hmm...if only i could cut out those two senes because after awhile you get tired of holding a pillow infront of you face 

[dutchgirlfan]

thanks fiona...hmm and I think i'm gonna watch that movie soon which first 2 poems you mean exactly??  *really* and *a scream for help*  ??

[Fiona682]

yepers

[dutchgirlfan]

okay cool....
Posted on: March 16, 2008, 08:42:17 PM2 new ones... not written on the same day...

One minute for me

I lay down on the ground
Enjoying the silence room
Stare into peacefull worlds
Forgetting my fears and gloom

Watching the blue floor
Laying there on my chest
Without something to see
It’s my one minute rest

I am all alone
Taking some time for me
No thoughts, no people, no worries
Just one minute to be free.

Useless Words

Believe, keep faith, be strong
These are useless words
For someone...
for me...
Who doesn’t know
Where she belongs

Believe in yourself
Be who you want to be
Decide who you are
Choose your own way
Than the solution won’t be far

Why is everyone telling me this?
How do you know for sure?
Cauz right now I cannot believe
That I’ll find the right cure

[Thera]

wow, those poems are pretty good, well done. my fav one would be "Lost Glory"

[dutchgirlfan]

thanks thera

[Thera]

thanks thera

you're welcome

[Mrok(Gloom)Robert M]

Uh.. finally I dig to your work ... hehe.. sounds as your complains you couldnt find mine poems ... Eh.. Yours *One minute for me* is lovely ... I wish I would join ya at that relaxing moment at that time but its seems like I am having only messy hours in my head ... I need some chilling... like having such one minute with mind clean from thoughts rush  ... Yeah... Hug Flourishing Stars Kiss just in care if I wont be around ... Buying it by a dorky smile ... *Useless words* is a talented reflection of your thoughts ... Disbelieve gives intresting emotion... floods by question and demanding tune. .. You are amazing in making poem like from everything ... Write on ... I gotta go ... Good day.. I guess I will drop in a bit later ... cya

[dutchgirlfan]

thanks Robert

I have an advice for you to get that one minute rest....just let something drop under your bed so that you have to lay down under the bed to catch it....that's how I got my one minute rest

[hazel681]

they are both nice...i like them, you choose good topics to right about.

[dutchgirlfan]

well thanks if you have advice for me let me know

[Fiona682]

I like them both but definitly the 1st one more, congrats there good, ur good