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Re: new poem 21/2; Poetic View
« Reply #645 on: February 21, 2009, 03:57:16 PM »
I really like the last line!
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Re: Keep Me Waiting
« Reply #646 on: April 22, 2009, 09:23:50 AM »
Keep me waiting

I am here
Still staring to nothing
Still here, already for hours
Waiting for you

You know that i´m still wondering
Where you might be
When you might come back
Maybe back to me?

Do you know?
Or do I know?!
That might be the question
Is there really something to wonder about?
 
Maybe there’s nothing to give answers too
Maybe I will slowly stop fainting
But despite that my thesis probably
Will always keep me waiting

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Re: Keep Me Waiting
« Reply #647 on: April 22, 2009, 03:54:40 PM »
good job
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Re: Keep Me Waiting
« Reply #648 on: April 23, 2009, 01:07:35 AM »
thank you darling.
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Re: Keep Me Waiting
« Reply #649 on: April 27, 2009, 11:53:23 AM »
Yes,very good. :) :) :) :)
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Re: Keep Me Waiting
« Reply #650 on: April 27, 2009, 12:01:32 PM »
thnx darling :)

right now..im a bit more into dutch poems instead of the english ones...
but maybe they will come soon agani..idk
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Re: Keep Me Waiting
« Reply #651 on: April 27, 2009, 12:08:51 PM »
Hi. :) I'm sure dutch peoms can be translated to english.
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Re: Keep Me Waiting
« Reply #652 on: April 27, 2009, 12:16:27 PM »
well..maybe

but then there not that pretty anymore I think.
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Re: Keep Me Waiting
« Reply #653 on: April 27, 2009, 12:28:57 PM »
Well,maybe you can write the dutch version of a peom,THEN translate it for us? ;D
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Re: Keep Me Waiting
« Reply #654 on: April 27, 2009, 12:32:59 PM »
hahaha ofcourse ;)

i will try one, right now ;)
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Re: Keep Me Waiting
« Reply #655 on: April 27, 2009, 12:34:51 PM »
Good. :) :) :) :)
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Re: Keep Me Waiting
« Reply #656 on: April 27, 2009, 12:50:08 PM »
I prefer this one way more in dutch cauz the words in dutch are way more poetic and makes it more, maybe mysterious....more feeling. Like in dutch the title is one word
'De Verlorene'  Idk..its better in dutch. I will translate antoher one too.

the lost one

I can only stare
In the unreachable distance
I do not feel a thing...
I do not see a thing...
But still I continue looking
Pering in the solitary depth
Cold as ice
Is the look in my eyes
The deathly chillness as a serial killer
Shivering, I feel the small hair
Standing upright in the cold
Of my non-beating heart
Sinked far away
Unattainable
In the depth
Of my lost soul

(I have died)



ps...is it I have died? or is it Did I die?
« Last Edit: April 27, 2009, 12:51:51 PM by dutchgirlfan »
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Re: Keep Me Waiting
« Reply #657 on: April 27, 2009, 12:57:44 PM »
That's very good.If it lost anything in the translation,it couldn't have lost a lot(I don't know how to speak dutcvh though,lol).Very good.God bless . :) :) :) :) :)
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Re: Keep Me Waiting
« Reply #658 on: April 27, 2009, 12:59:03 PM »
well thank you...
well it did lost the magic of the words a bit in my opion
but im glad you like it ;)
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Re: Keep Me Waiting
« Reply #659 on: April 27, 2009, 01:02:28 PM »
It was great. :) I'm glad you wrote it.Well,i gotta go get some sleepage now,I worked all last night,and haven't slept.God bless.I hope you will write more for us. :) :) :) :)
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